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Adding song for background was a good idea and the story is also a good choice because i wanted to listen all ,maybe you could say , " read by..." But except this , everything seems good , good jobb
ReplyDeleteThe music was a good idea, it sounded nice. You should have started by saying the book's title, the author's name, and your own full name. Also, it would be better if there were no quick pauses at the beginning; that part felt too fast. However, later on, some pauses appeared, which made it clearer and sounded better. Also, the intonation in the second part's dialogues was nice, and your pronunciations were very clear. Good job 🙌🏻
ReplyDeleteYou could have mentioned who it was read,written and illustrated by in the begging. It is easy to follow but maybe it would be better if you stop between sentences a little more.Good job
ReplyDeleteCould have been a lot better if you guys added the name of the author, the name of the book and who it was read by. The 1st person read it word by word, the words were clear but she should have paid attention to the punctuations. Also it wasnt clear when they were talking or when they were not because all were read by the same tone. The 2nd person read it a lot better, was careful with the punctuations and changed his tone in the parts where they were talking. The background music was also good. Good job.
ReplyDeleteIt would have been better if the author's name and the names of the readers of this book had been mentioned at the beginning of the video. It is easy to follow. I think the emotions in the dialogues are well reflected. There are some minor issues in the editing towards the end, but overall I liked it.
ReplyDeleteAdding background music was a cool idea. Ponunciation is not flawless and could be enhanced but vocalising is good. An overall good job.
ReplyDeleteI liked both of you guys's voice tones. Along with that, the faint calming music in the backgorund is also a nice touch. Pronunciations were also good and understandable. Only thing I noticede is that the sudden starting of the video. It would be better if you first gave informations such as the name of the book and its author, rather than starting to read directly.
ReplyDeleteI really liked your pronunciation. Your slow speaking made the narration clear and understandable. It would have been better if you had mentioned who was introducing the book and the author's name. You could have also added "the end" when the story ended, or included pictures or animations related to the events. But in general it is very good.
ReplyDeleteTo make it better, the speakers could speak more clearly and add more emotion, especially during important moments like when Della cuts her hair or when they exchange gifts. Giving short introduction at the beginning to explain what the story is about would be good.
ReplyDeleteOverall it is a nice video. Thank you for your efforts<3
I like the pronounciations in the first part clear and easy to follow but there could be small gaps between the sentences to make it more natural. Second part is a bit unclear compared to first I think the voice could be louder and more clear to make it more understandable but I like it for the most part.
ReplyDeletestops could be better, it reads so strait. it would be better if the names of the readers were mentioned.other than that pronunciations were fine and music idea was nice. thanks for your work.
ReplyDeletePronunciations sound okay and storytelling doesn't feel rushed but reader's name should have been mentioned in the beginning. It is alright for a first try I guess, thanks for your efforts!
ReplyDeleteIn the first part, the words are quite clear and easy to understand, but the slow reading affects the flow of the story a bit. Adding background music was a creative idea. The second part is better — it’s a nice effort for a first experience, but it should develop over time. Thanks for your story.
ReplyDeletePronunciations are very good. I liked the fluidity of the storytelling. the sentences are clear and sharp. Congratulations on your efforts.
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